I don't think I understand the joke... or any part... of the entire animation.
You're getting so good I'm running out of things to critique.
The sound effects, the fluidity, the changing of the sprites to crouching, Yoshi eating, the sprites that you made/edited to fit with the scenario, it's all great. It isn't perfect, far from that, but it's a phenomenal start. However, I will now insert my major criticism; the camera is a bit zoomed in. Sprite animation goes uses what we know from video games, and in said games the camera is wide, giving the player a large view. Well, you do not need to put the camera in the distance the games themselves commonly would, wider shots make things easier to look at, and create a better sense of environment. Something can zoom in at a fight, but the screen should never feel crowded.
All an all, you are on a great path. The only suggestion I have, no matter how dorky it sounds, is to keep practicing. You will become proficient and agile through animation and will learn tricks and skills to make your creations come to life. Good luck.
P.S: Sorry I didn't review your previous animation. I will try to review all of which you create.
Thanks! I will definitely try zooming out more, and sometime soon I am trying to make an drawn animation... probably won’t go well :3 btw the last animation was so bad especially the sound
Doesn't load for me.
Sorry about it. I was hoping it would load for everyone. What computer did you log on?
All in all, it's an ok canabalt clone. I would suggest adding in more variations too keep from the boring, like, 4 different buildings. Keep up the good work.
mm Thanks ! xD
The lack of sound and music really brought it down. The gameplay is pretty good even if it is very simple. It is just long enough in each zone for you to not get bored of the same landscape.
Thank you for your feedback we will take it into consideration to improve the current game and future ones. We have updated the game recently adding 2 new maps (10 new rounds) we hope you enjoy!
Thank you, Jingus. Your name always makes me smile :)
I mean I liked it but,
person one gets hurt in a game of Tag with person two.
Person one falls to the ground street fighter style.
GAME OVER flashes one the screen as if it was a video game.... because street fighter is a video game.
Person two brings person one to the hospital. Person one dislikes the hospital.
Narrator announces location.
Person one finds a stephascope and places it around his/her neck "look im a doctor"
Person one holds the stephascope to his/her nose "Now im a elephant"
Person two is annoyed by this. The end
True beauty at its finest.
Thank you JingusBingus. I can always count on you for smiles c:
If you are going to draw in MsPaint, I think that the pencil tool is better than the brush tool because you do not get the ugly white splotches in between the line and the inner filling.
I like how strangely atmospheric your drawings are
You really think so?!! THANK YOU! =D
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