JingusBingus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Muybridge Animation]

Looks okay until it just skips back to the first frame of the loop.

[Fays revenge]

That some how creeped me out more than boku no pico so... congrats?
Overall a pretty good short, the background was weirdly out of resolution, but other than that I like it!
Keep up the good work! :3

willcamick responds:

Thanks. Yah the program im using is not made for drawing background so I draw them in flash 8 and import them over. It gives it an interesting look though. Im glad you enjoyed it regardless :) Also I looked up boku no pico . . . o_O Kinda wish I didt lol.

[Pencil the animator 2]

While comedic, the animation was choppy and scattered. It didn't have the fluidness of other stick figure animations. The movie's okay... but could definitely be improved.

[( Original ) Nesia Legend of Cosieda Episode 1]

Can't wait for the (hopefully) next episode!

[scen1]

This is so wrong.
There is basically no animation, you spelled scene wrong in the title, the angle music is too loud, there is no reason to post something that isn't finished, The subtitles are unreadable, and the ambience loops too obviously. Overall, lazy work.

[clash royale animation arrows]

Short and Sweet.

[How to Enjoy Valentine's Day if You're Single]

Neat! I can feel odd1sout in this, did you inspire from him?

(also very funny, keep making videos!)

RyanimationsOfficial responds:

Yeah for sure, I'm a huge fan of his. He's the reason my videos are 'cartoons', I love telling stories, but I'm definitely not an artist lol.

[Mr. Sticky vs Cranky Sticky]

Okay so there are many problems with this movie.
For one, there is zero audio, and believe me when I say audio is VERY important even if there's no dialogue.
Secondly, while the style of the whole thing being like a comic may sound okayish on paper, it does not work for an animation, at least one like this. You should have really just made each strip a full screen experience without giving an awkward, lazy comic feel.
Thridly, while the animation is... ehhhhhh not ehhh, naaaa... there is much to be desired from it. Parts of the weird comic panel outlines disappear, it lacks any pacing and it's VERY sketchy.
Finally, it's SHORT. Like, very short. 15 seconds for a fight animation is nothing.

I can only cut you so much slack for your first movie, I just didn't really enjoy it.
Hopefully you will improve and make awesome animations in the future.

mrsticky005 responds:

Damn I am just happy that someone actually watched this and even took the time to criticize it.

That is totally fair that you didn't like it and a lot of what you said seems valid.

Still for me, I consider this an accomplishment even if I still have a long ways to go.

thank you