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    Not terrible for first attempt, but here is my critique,
    For starters, everything looks out of resolution, how ever you got your sprites they are not a source to be used again, it makes everything look blurry and make added in objects look out of place.

    Secondly, if you have a mic, you can voice act. At least enough to make something like this, I can understand wanting more voice actors but you must not give up without trying.

    Lastly, I will input my nit-picks:
    Ash/Jeff's mouth is too high, it looks like his forehead is dancing. Things like text that you added in look out of place and incorrect. Green rock. The intro and outro are a bit too long, for pacing reasons I suggest you edit this.

    That's all of them. I hope you read this and respond if you do not agree with some of my reasonings and hope to clear them up. Good Luck.

    Billybobjoe7 responds:

    Thanks for the criticism, I actually have flash now so it should be better animation, and I’m getting better. Yes the head animation was horible and lazily made, after watching some tutorials I now am better at that at least a little and intro will be shortened. Finally... prepare for cringey voice acting from me!!! :3

    What makes his situation worse is that he used two arrows just to get in.
    So he only would've gained three more arrows than what he started with.

    Also amazing video dude, the resolution seemed to like constantly change? Like it'd still be 1080p but the video would go back and fourth in quality, idk, maybe its just something with my pc.

    Snackers responds:

    ha, thanks! yeah, the resoloution is a bit wonky since I directly converted the video through flash rather than using Swivel, but I might reupload it in better quality if I can. thanks for the review!

    oh jeezums this is really well animated

    It feels like a real anime, one problem I have is the resolution is kinda low,
    and by kinda I mean PRETTY low.

    BestofNesia responds:

    Yeah, the resolution in this one is 1280 x 720 ( you can change to that in the bottom right corner of the video ), and the low res look is probably due to the 2px blur I use. Without it everything is really pixelated. The episodes for my original anime are at 1920 x 1080 and have better quality ( at least with episode 2 and beyond ).

    This is real good

    booksuny responds:

    Your comment good too!

    This is glorious

    zorx7 responds:

    thanks :)

    Great animation and pretty good sfx, my only problem is some of the timing on the jokes is strange making them fall a bit short.

    Mehuuzers responds:

    Could you elaborate? This is good feedback, but I just need to know some examples for which I can improve.

    Great music and voice actor.
    The animation was pretty good with only a few small things I thought could be touched up slightly.

    Wondermeow responds:

    Thank you for the feedback

    I feel like I'm watching the newest hit anime.

    willcamick responds:

    Ha lol. Its a work in progress ^o^

    Desu Desu

    and ship goals already

    KAWAIII

    But seriously, I love this please don't stop.

    willcamick responds:

    Thank you so much! =D

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