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holy shit that dog part

WeirdOwl responds:

Ha lol :)

so so many things off

Very nice animation, especially the coloring. Only gripe are sounds, which didn't feel as professional as the rest of the work.

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Yes its true I really need to learn how to get sound correctly I struggle so much in that area. Thank you!

This definitely has the best animation and art by far compared to your other cartoons.

I think this was an accident but, this is the same video as your last one, literally.
I bet you just clicked the wrong file.

There are... many problems.

First of all the animation is incredibly choppy. You can also clearly see erased lines or lines just left over from using the transform tool or something. There is no color and your anatomy is all over the place. The lines are immensely sloppy and jagged giving a strange and unfinished look to them.

The audio is another situation, there are multiple times throughout the video where your audio seems to cut out or glitch. Not only that but I highly recommend you use a script, and if you already do, remember to rehearse and redo lines. Finally, I think you need to improve your enunciation to overall improve the quality and coherence of the piece.

You do of course get some slack due to this appearing to be your first animation, but I am merely pointing out things for you to improve in your next one.
I hope you found this review helpful and that you will continue to create animations.

JustAnOrange responds:

i am really sorry for my poor quality in animation i will desperately try to improve and take you criticism into account

this video is actually from my yt channel i just made this account so when i enter something like an extra class/tutoring school irl i can link them to this website

Draw more in-betweens, heighten the framerate, have more consistent shading, and add sound.

That is my advice to you.

The animation is fairly decent and the backgrounds look nice. However, my major problem with the video is the audio. The voices are far too quiet, making the voices incomprehensible and just blend with the rest of the audio. The gunshots are probably the worst sound effect with the audio instead of looping just playing over and over again. I hope you take this into consideration when you hopefully continue with this series.

Snackers responds:

i'm pretty disappointed with how i handled the audio, i will make the voices higher for the next episode, and properly sound scape the audio. thanks for the criticism. :)

I don't think I understand the joke... or any part... of the entire animation.

I don't...
I can't...
WHAT!?!

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